Group Story writing (A)
Revenge
Jun,Gonca, Yosuke, Sean
When he got home, and as he entered the house, he realized everything had changed. First, he turned on the light. Secondly, he looked around his house, and he really surprised that situation because there were nothing in his house, and the windows were broken. Only few things were in there. He felt that something is wrong and recognized that someone came his house during his long trip.
He really worried about this situation because he never thought about this situation before. First few minute, he couldn’t control his emotion because of afraid everything but, he found himself 10 minutes later. He decided find some evidence. He worked around very carefully. First, he checked the kitchen, and he found some kitchen tool missing. Actually, knife was missed. He really worried about this thing because only knife was missed. He was really depressed. Secondly, he went to his room. At that time, he felt something’s wrong. He smells disgusting. Finally, he turned on the light, and he really shocked. On his bed, bloods were on there, and knife was on there.
He thought that someone was killed in his apartment. However, he couldn’t find body yet, so he looked around very seriously, and he found something at his closet. He found some bloods in front of closet, so he worked very carefully to his closet. Finally, He opened the door, and he was very shocked. Unfortunately, his thinking was correct. The death body was in his closet. He threw out everything because the body looked like very disgusting and he couldn’t endure disgusting smell. He was afraid and didn’t know what he should do. He thought to call the police. However, he thought if he called police, It will be wrong because the police will be claim him. He looked at the body and thought who was this and what happened in my house. Finally, he recognized this body. She was Alice who was secretary in his boss’s office.
At that time, he heard some strong sound. It supposed to be police but he didn’t call the police. Police broke door and came in his house, and they sight guns to his face and shout to him. “You’re under arrest.” He answered that “I’m innocent! It is a trap everything.” However, they didn’t believe his answer. He thought few minute, and he ran to window and jumped out of there. They shots gun to him, but he ran away from his house safely.
Very big conspiracy happened to him. He thought who was set me out during the escaping. At that time, he was shot from police, and he fall under the cliff. However, he didn’t die. He swam. Finally, He recognized who was set him out. Everything controlled his boss. “My Boss set me out because I know his fault. Also, she knew everything, so she died. Ok! It’s payback time! I will pay back everything! I’ll revenge to you”.
He arrive beach, and he looked for phone booth. He called his boss and said like this. “Did you set me out because I know everything. Okay boss, It is payback time. I will break every your life. It’s a show time.” and he hang out the phone. He worked to dark place and he disappeared.
[To be continue, in Jun's Journal ]
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I feel a little bit dizzy about your story...
ReplyDeleteIt's really a long story..anyway, I am looking forward to your next part.. good story~~
Vicky